871.1864.The hallowing of Pain 

871.1864.The hallowing of Pain

My interpretation of F871, ‘The hallowing of Pain’, with ED’s alternate words in {curly brackets}:

Stanza 1.

The hallowing of Pain
Like hallowing of Heaven,
Obtains at a corporeal cost –
The Summit is not given – [Stanza 1 and 2 are enjambed]

S1.

Just because you spend a lot of time writing poetry, even to the point of painful loneliness, becoming a great poet is not a given

 

Stanza 2.

To Him who strives severe
At middle {Bottom; centre} of the Hill –
But He who has achieved the Top {Crest}-
All – is the price of All –

S2.

to Him who works hard but is a second-rate poet. To become a truly great poet requires commitment of your entire life.